Some Poetry?

Hey everybody!

Today I want to share a piece that I have been working on for a while now.  The message is about facing challenges on your journey to accompishing your dreams and  how there are always others who want to see you fail and how if you can look past that and try your hardest, all your hard work will pay off. I haven’t really named it yet and I would like to point out that I have bullet-pointed the whole thing (which may annoy you) but it’s just so each line has its own place without a huge gap between lines. It isn’t 100% perfect but it’s pretty good for a rough piece. We’ve still go far to go!

  • Everywhere I go
  • The people that I know
  • They like to say I won’t get far, that
  • I’ll fail before I start
  • I’ll show them all one day
  • That I am strong enough.
  • I am on my way
  • I won’t give up
  • My heart is in a rush
  • I can’t wait ’til I
  • Reach the top
  • You told me I’m not good enough
  • LIAR!
  • Tried to break me,
  • Charming as a snake, you.
  • This is my space
  • And I’ll break the rules,
  • I won’t play the fool no more
  • There’s the open door
  • Laugh at me all you want
  • Want a fight?
  • I’ll give you a war.
  • Come after me
  • I’ll just slam shut the door
  • Can’t break down my walls
  • I will hold up, stand up, stand tall.
  • Everywhere I go
  • People like to say
  • I will not get far
  • But I will get my way
  • I’m not the one to sing a song
  • This is an exception
  • Saw through all that deception
  • Broke down all the walls, stood strong, stood tall
  • Kick me when I’m down
  • Beat me to the ground
  • Snarky one-liners ringing in my ears
  • Broken record on repeat
  • Won’t accept defeat.
  • Got to hand it to you though,
  • I bet it’s tough
  • Acting like you got cold blood
  • And a heart o’ stone everywhere you go.
  • Oh, so you think I’m good enough now?
  • Spamming my phone
  • Don’t see the notif
  • Busy sitting on my throne.
  • Surrounded by success, made huge progress and I’ve still go far to go.
  • It doesn’t bother me as much
  • When you say I don’t deserve it
  • Because deep down, I know I do
  • And I know people miles around
  • Who’d say the same to you.

What do you think? I would love to hear any improvements you think could help with this piece of -does this count as poetry? Hit like, share and comment if you want to see more posts like this. Send in your questions for the 100th post Q&A via the comments, a post which I have also got a song for. Follow me for more madness and I’ll see you all later!

But until next time, keep blabbing!

 

 

 

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